Paper Cranes on Different Planes
- Oct 22, 2018
- 11 min read
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INT. MANSION - EARLY EVENING
The front door flings open. AMELIA, 24, stands there
panting. Her eyes stare off into the distance, blank. She
begins to wander around the large space, exploring the rooms
and looking for answers. We notice that her hand is wrapped
in a bandage.
She wanders for several minutes, when she is surprised by a
TELEPHONE RINGING. She turns around and sees an old landline
phone sitting on the table. This confuses her and then it
stops ringing. She shrugs it off and carries onto the next
room.
In the next room, she discovers an old piano. She tinkers
around on it, showing her expertise.
The PHONE RINGS again, but this time is sounds closer. She
looks up and the phone is sitting on the piano. She answers
it. amelia
Hello?
There is static at first, but then an AUTOMATED OPERATOR is
heard clearly.
OPERATOR
Hello! Please confirm your name. Is
this Amelia Anderson of 5842 West
Harper Avenue Apartment #17?
AMELIA
Uh...?
OPERATOR
Sorry, I didn’t get that. Please
confirm your name. Is this Amelia
Anderson of 5842 West Harper Avenue
Apartment #17? Press 1 for yes.
Press 2 for no. Press 3 for
assistance.
AMELIA
Um, I don’t need a credit card.
OPERATOR
Sorry, I didn’t get--
She hangs up begins to walk away, but the phone appears in
front of her RINGING again. Frustrated, she answers.
OPERATOR
Hello! Please confirm your name. Is
this Amelia Anderson of 5842 West
Harper Avenue Apartment #17? Press
1 for yes. Press 2 for no. Press 3
for assistance.
Rolling her eyes, Amelia goes to hang up but--
OPERATOR
Do not hang up. This is an
important message from your life
provider. Please confirm your name.
Is this Amelia Anderson of 5842
West Harper Avenue Apartment #17?
Press 1 for yes. Press 2 for no.
Press 3 for assistance.
With an annoyed scoff, Amelia presses 3.
OPERATOR
You’ve selected "assistance".
Please state your question.
AMELIA
Yeah, hi, what the hell is this?
OPERATOR
This is an important message from
your life provider. Our team offers
our sincerest condolences for your
loss. In order to process your
transition with ease, please
confirm your name.
AMELIA
My loss? What loss?
OPERATOR
(cutting in over her) Is this
Amelia Anderson of 5842 West
Harper Avenue Apartment #17?
Press 1 for yes. Press 2 for
no. Press 3 for assistance.
Frustrated, she pushes 1
OPERATOR
Thank you, Amelia Anderson. Just a
moment while I look up your
account.
She opens her mouth to speak, but a few seconds of waiting
MUSIC plays. She begins to move to the next room, the phone
against her hear. Instead of finding herself in a new room
in the mansion, she’s been transported back home to her
apartment.
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
She looks around, startled by the new environment. What’s
even more unusual, is she sees herself doing dishes from the
other day. The Amelia from the past slices her hand on a
knife.
PAST AMELIA
Shit.
Past Amelia turns to go to the bathroom. We hear WATER
RUNNING. Amelia holds up her hand that has a bandage wrapped
around her palm. She unwraps the bandage to find her scar
slowly disappearing. She is stunned.
OPERATOR
Thank you for your patience. I have
your account information here. You
have twelve million, six-hundred
fourteen thousand, five-hundred
twenty two minutes to review. Press
1 to review now, press 2 to review
later.
AMELIA
Review what?
OPERATOR
You’ve selected "review now" is
that correct?
AMELIA
I didn’t push anything--
OPERATOR
Great! Press any number to begin.
Amelia slowly lowers the phone from her ear, looking at the
numbers with a wary eye. Haphazardly, she presses the number
2
INT. CHILDHOOD LIVING ROOM - DAY
Amelia opens her eyes. At first glance, nothing seems to
have changed. However, she notices she is now dressed in a
children’s outfit. She is sitting on the floor, several
squares of half-folded paper origami surrounding. She looks
down at the paper, confused at first, but the memory of the
paper cranes creeps in. She picks one up and admires it
before a gentle HUMMING catches her ear. She turns her head,
seeing her MOTHER sitting in her chair crocheting. She
admires her with a warm smile. Mother turns to look at
Amelia. She smiles.
Amelia continues to be amazed by the vision of her mother.
Her hand slowly reaches out to her, her fingers almost
touching her floral robe when...
INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Amelia is back in her living room, her hand stretched out
towards nothing. The phone is pressed to her ear with her
other hand. She snaps back into the scene, stunned. She
pulls away the phone, re-pressing the same number several
times.
OPERATOR
I’m sorry--I’m sorry--I’m sorry,
the number you are trying to reach
has expired. Please select a new
number.
Amelia puts the phone to her ear, tears in her eyes.
AMELIA
What was that?
OPERATOR
This was your favoirte
childhood memory. Please
select a new number.
Amelia looks side to side, agast at the newfound power of
the call. She looks at each number, wondering where each
will lead. She puts the phone back up to her ear.
AMELIA
Can you tell me where each number
goes?
OPERATOR
Press 1 for your first memory.
Press 2 for your favorite memory.
Press 3 for your most recalled
memory. Press 4 for your best
accomplishment. Press 5 for your
biggest regret. Press 6 for your
worst memory. Press 7 for your last
memory. Press 8 to review The
After. Press 9 to end this call, a
non reversible action. Para
espanol, presione cero. For
assistance, press the pound key.
Amelia pulls the phone away from her ear, considering the
options. She pushes the pound key.
OPERATOR
You’ve selected "assistance".
Please state your question.
AMELIA
Yeah, can I go out of order?
OPERATOR
You may choose any number to begin.
AMELIA
(pressing 6)Might as well get
it over with.
She takes a deep breath and closes her eyes.
INT. HOSPITAL BEDROOM - DAY
Amelia opens her eyes, discovering her head laying down on a
blanket. Further inspection leads to her finding she is
laying on the chest of a breathing person. Slowly, she lifts
her head. Her mother lies there, half asleep, her breath
labored. She is dying. Amelia stares at her for a few
moments. Her hands lightly strokes her mothers hand. Mother
opens her eyes, giving a weak smile.
Amelia’s eyes fill with tears. She returns the weak smile.
She lays her head back down on mother’s chest and begins to
HUM the same tune heard earlier. The tune carries on like a
distant echo...
INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Sitting on the floor, Amelia has the phone pressed to her
ear. She stares off and lets it drop to her shoulder. The
operator is heard quietly away from her ear.
OPERATOR
Still there? Press the pound key
for assistance.
Beat. Amelia picks up the phone again, looking at the
numbers. She selects 1.
INT. BABY ROOM - DAY
Amelia is dressed in baby pajamas. Her eyes stare up at
something on the ceiling. Her hand reaches up towards a
mobile made of paper cranes. Her fingers brush across one
gently. It reflects in her clear eyes. Her mother leans in
between her and the mobile.
MOTHER
Good morning, beautiful. I love
you.
INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Amelia is still seated on the floor, the phone against her
ear. She comes back around, sniffing and wiping under her
eyes.
AMELIA
Uh, can you remind me what I have
left?
OPERATOR
Press 3 for your most recalled
memory. Press 4 for your best
accomplishment. Press 5 for your
biggest regret. Press 7 for your
last memory. Press 8 to review The
After.
AMELIA
Um...
She looks at the numbers and picks number 3.
INT. RECORD STORE - DAY
Amelia and NATE, 24, are looking through a box of records
together. He picks up a record to show her. They share a
laugh together. We see a sparking ring on her finger.
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
Amelia smiles at the fond memory. She carefully chooses her
next number. She pushes 4.
INT. STAGE - NIGHT
Amelia finishes playing a SONG on the piano. A small
audience claps. She takes a bow.
INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Amelia pulls the phone away from her ear. She sighs and
presses 5.
INT. DINING ROOM/KITCHEN - DAY
Amelia stands just outside of the kitchen, a letter in hand.
Nathan is seen behind her in the kitchen, sirring a pot on
the stove. Seeing the address on th envelope. She gets
excited and tears it open, reading the letter.
INSERT LETTER:
Dear Miss Amelia Anderson, we are please to inform you of
your acceptance to Juliard for our piano studies program.
Congratulations, we look forward to seeing you this fall!
Juliard Admissions
BACK TO SCENE
She reads the letter with joy, but a sadness falls over her
face. She glances over her shoulder at Nate cooking. She
looks back at the letter. She also looks at the engagement
ring on her finger. With a sigh she tears the letter in
half.
INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Amelia keep the phone pressed against her ear. She is quiet
for a moment.
AMELIA
I should’ve gone. That was really
stupid of me, hm?
She is met with silence.
OPERATOR
Sorry, I didn’t get that.
AMELIA
(wry laugh)Right, yeah, of
course you didn’t. You’re not
even a person. (beat) I’m not
sure if I’m really even a
person.
She looks down at the palm of her hand where the cut on her
hand used to be.
OPERATOR
Still there? Press the pound key
for assistance.
She continues to look at her hand.
OPERATOR
Your remaining options are Press 7
for your last memory. Press 8 to
review The After. Press 9 to end
this call, a non reversible action.
Or, press the pound key for
assistance.
She presses the pound key.
OPERATOR
You’ve selected "assistance".
Please state your question.
AMELIA
(beat)I’m not alive anymore,
am I?
OPERATOR
Amelia Anderson of 5842 West Harper
Avenue Apartment #17. Born January
4th 1952. Died March 7th 1976. Age
24.
Amelia doesn’t seem to be surprised much at all. The phone
drops away from her ear against her shoulder when she bows
her head. We hear the operator speaking away from her ear.
OPERATOR
Our team offers our sincerest
condolences for your loss.
She sniffs and wipes away her tears. She selects the number
7.
INT. RECORD STORE - EVENING
Earlier today, Amelia is in the same clothes she was wearing
when she came in the door. Amelia and Nate leaf through
records, the gap between them wide. They are obviously not
happy with eachother at this moment. Nate pulls out a record
and turns to Amelia, trying out a smile.
He forces a small laugh. Amelia glances up from her stack
for a brief moment, unamused. She turns to a new stack. Nate
sighs and returns to leafing though his stack. While leafing
through her stack, Amelia considers the ring on her finger.
Eventually, she removes it and turns to Nathan. She holds it
up to him and puts it in his hand. She looks confused and
opens his mouth to speak, but Amelia is already heading
towards the door.
EXT/INT. CAR - NIGHT
Amelia drives. The RAIN falls. Her WIPERS BEAT methodically.
There is a blinding light flash. With a gasp, she throws her
hands up to her face.
INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
The sound of a CAR CRASHING is echos in the distance. Amelia
throws the phone down to shield her face. It takes a moment
for her to realize it isn’t happening anymore. Slowly, she
lowers her hand. A drop of blood oozes down the side of her
face. She notices it and touches it with a finger and holds
it to her eye. The operator speaks softly through the
reciever on the floor.
OPERATOR
You may press 8 to review The
After. Press 9 to end this call, a
non reversible action. Or, press
the pound key for assistance.
Amelia takes a deep breath and presses 8.
INT RECORD STORE - DAY
Nate goes through the records on his own, despondant. Amelia
stands nearby, watching with the phone still against her ear
and a drop of blood on her forehead. He reaches the misfit
record that’s been there forever. He takes it to the
register.
NATE
Just this, please.
INT. LIVING ROOM OF THE FUTURE - DAWN
Amelia has the phone against her ear, her face blank.
OPERATOR
Press 9 to end this call, a non
reversible action, or press the
pound key for assistance.
The sun starts to rise. We pull away from her, a modern
smart phone sitting on the table’s edge. It lights up and
starts to RING and VIBRATE. This startles her as she notices
this is not her home anymore. A YOUNG WOMAN dressed for 2018
enters and answers the phone.
YOUNG WOMAN
Hello? Sarah, hey, how you doing,
girl? Yeah, I was just working on
it...
Her voice drifts off as she walks into another room, the
CONVERSATION carrying on muffled. Amelia rises to a slow
stand, taking in the new environemt. Things have moved
around, more modern, colorful things in the place of her
things. Where her record player used to a be, a laptop with
spotify opened plays MUSIC. She leans into it with
curiosity. She taps a few keys and accidentally opens up a
youtube video of a President Trump dubstep remix. This
startles her and she shuts the laptop closed. She hits the
pound key on the phone.
OPERATOR
You’ve selected "assistance".
Please state your question.
AMELIA
Is this the future?
OPERATOR
This is the present. This telephone
line has been open for 42 years.
Your remaining options are stay on
the line for continued viewing,
press 9 to end this call, a non
reversible action, or press the
pound key for assistance.
Sinking to the floor in shock at the number of years, she
presses the pound key again.
OPERATOR
You’ve selected "assistance".
Please state your question.
AMELIA
What happens when I end the call?
OPERATOR
I’m sorry. I cannot answer that.
She lingers on the phone for what seems like forever, the
world going on around her as if she moves much slower than
it. Eventually, she lowers the phone and presses 9, lifting
it back to her ear.
OPERATOR
You’ve chosen to end this call. Is
this correct? This cannot be
reversed.
AMELIA
Yes.
INT. MANSION - EARLY EVENING
Amelia is transported back to the mansion, the phone against
her ear.
OPERATOR
Thank you for reviewing your twelve
million, six-hundred fourteen
thousand, five-hundred twenty two
minutes. Our team offers our
sincerest condolences for your
loss. We hope that this experience
has offered you the proper
assistance for an easy, hassle free
transition. At this time as a
courtsey to you, please choose a
memory you would like to revisit
once more.
Amelia lowers the phone again, considering each number. She
presses 2.
OPERATOR
You have selected to re-review your
best memory. Is that correct?
AMELIA
Yes.
She squinches her eyes shut.
INT. CHILDHOOD LIVING ROOM - DAY
Amelia opens her eyes, dressed as a young child. She looks
around, pleased to return. She looks down at the half-folded
paper origami squares. She chooses a fresh sheet and begins
to fold it, focusing methodically on each crease.
INTERCUT BETWEEN PAST AMELIA FOLIDNG PAPER AND PRESENT
AMELIA ON THE PHONE
Present Amelia’s lips lift into a nostalgic smile.
Past Amelia continues to fold.
Present Amelia rises to a stand, walking towards the window.
Past Amelia continues to fold.
Present Amelia contines walking to the window.
INT. CHILDHOOD KITCHEN - DAY
Past Amelia finishes, holding up her origami paper crane
creation. Her mother is heard HUMMING. She turns and spots
her at the stove. Amelia’s hand reaches out towards her
robe, grasping it. Mother turns to smile at Amelia. Amelia
reaches up and hands her the paper crane. Mother takes it
and smiles.
Past Amelia rises to a stand, and turns. When seh turns we
see there s a field of papercranes, she begins to walk
through them towards the window.
INTERCUT BETWEEN PAST AMELIA WALKING AND PRESENT AMELIA
WALKING
EXT/INT. CAR - NIGHT
Amelia is driving, a light flashes and she raises her arms
ot shield her face. CRASH, GLASS SHATTER sound
INT. MANSION - SUNSET
INTERCUT BETWEEN PAST AMELIA AND AMELIA ON THE PHONE
The GLASS SHATTER continues on into the scene as a distant
echo, sparkling bits of glass particles float between both
Amelia’s
Present Amelia reaches the window, finding a paper crane
sitting on the sill. She picks it up and looks at it with a
smie.
OPERATOR
Thank you for your participation in
this end of life transition, Amelia
Anderson. To stay on the line and
start over, press 1. To continue to
the end, press 2.
She lowers the phone, looking between the numbers and the
paper crane. She makes her choice, unseen to the audience.
She puts the phone back to her ear, listening. She looks out
the window. We move outside, continuing to zoom out until...
FADE TO:
EXT. SPACE
A field of stars and planets float by.
OPERATOR
Thank you.
END.
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